Sunday, 14 September 2014

Terminate the Tobacco | Aishabella Sheikh

Terminate the Tobacco

An Opinionative Article by Aishabella Sheikh

Tobacco is ruining people’s lives. It causes disease, wastes money, contributes to poverty and damages the environment. So why do people continue to smoke? Out of their own selfishness, of course. It is a dirty habit that affects many around the world, including the children who are unfortunately exposed to second-hand smoke in public or even in their own homes. Some may think it makes you look “cool” or that it reduces stress, while others are disgusted by this filthy habit that causes so much trouble. Well, let’s look at both sides, shall we, and explore what is behind all the smoke.
First and foremost, the cigarette contains poisons so deadly that just the thought of inhaling them into your sensitive lungs is frightening. But even the fact that you could get lung cancer, emphysema or bronchitis doesn’t scare those hard core smokers. Even the disturbing images of people who have been dreadfully affected by tobacco smoking and what it can do to your body don’t seem to faze them. What about the smokers with children? Do they seem to care about their kids’ health and future? Though some smoke away from their kids, what about the risk in public areas where there is no safe place to breathe without inhaling cancer? An estimated 200,000 workers die every year due to exposure to smoke at work, and second-hand smoke is responsible for 3,000 lung cancer deaths yearly. Smoking is not only ruining the smoker’s health, but also everyone around them, and only because they are “stressed” or “too addicted to quit”.
Tobacco smoking is not only spoiling health, it is also connected to third world countries and how the tobacco industry is expanding its markets by selling it to the poor who then sell it on the streets just to survive. 84% of the 1.3 billion smokers worldwide live in developing countries, and they are more vulnerable to the Industry and need support. People living in developing countries are going hungry because land that was once used for growing crops is now cleared for the production of tobacco plants. It also contributes to a higher illiteracy rate, since money that could have been used on education is spent on tobacco. And the advertising convinces the poor to buy cigarettes when they should be spending the few amount of money they have on food and health care. So every time you light up, think of all those poor people starving and illiterate because of your selfishness.
Smoking also destroys the lovely environment, something that we are losing every day for numerous other reasons, but smoking is adding to the problem, day by day. Cigarettes are wrapped in paper, which is stripped from millions of hectares of forests that are home to many animals depending on it to survive. Plus, 10% of fire deaths are ignited by cigarettes. There are also less direct impacts to the environment, such as the resources used for packaging cigarettes. Given that tobacco has no benefit for society and the environment, these costs further highlight wasted resources.
But what about the smokers’ point of view? Many smokers began in the result of peer pressure, fitting in with modern culture or stress. At the time they might have felt they had no choice, and accidentally fallen in the wrong crowd, and kept smoking without doing anything about it. That's the problem with tobacco; it's addictive, and once you start, there is no turning back. But how hard is it to quit? Some people try for years and just can't seem to stop, while others have the will power to just put the cigarette down and give up. If you think about it, quitting the habit is all in the mind. It depends how determined you are, and thats how you can control it. But others who don't plan on quitting say it's their choice and they shouldn't be pressured to quit; that it is a free country, therefore the people should make the decision wisely about whether they smoke or not. All this conspiracy about smoking is causing even more stress, and why should we care about what other people do? Unless it affects us in a way where we can't avoid it, why are we trying to control other people's habits? Why can't we just mind our own business?
There are so many people in this world trying to make a difference, whether it is saving the environment or giving advice, but trying to stop a habit that has been going on for decades would be a miracle if achieved. It would also save millions of lives, and millions of trees, so it would definitely be worth the effort. But how much effort does it take to just quit? Many people quit things every day, so why can’t people quit smoking? Yes, it’s addictive, but think of this; is it really worth it? Is it worth polluting the atmosphere, destroying the sensitive lung tissue, and starving millions in developing countries? But most importantly, is it worth risking your own precious life that you only get one shot at?


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Persuasive Techniques :

Assertion
Biased Language
Emotive Language
Facts & Statistics
Generalisation
Rhetorical Questions

Text Response Essay: The Giver

Essay Topic: Jonas tells The Giver “We really have to protect people from wrong choices.” To what extent has the community embraced this idea, and at what cost?

Jonas tells The Giver “We really have to protect people from wrong choices.”(p.128). The Community has embraced this idea by restricting the choices citizens have, such as choosing their families, their assignments and their lives. People are limited in what they can do, see and learn. They don’t have freedom to form their own opinions, make their own decisions and choose their futures for themselves. They do not know the meaning of earning, deserving or being rewarded. They don’t know love, or the warm feeling of family and genuine concern for the people you care about. They are unaware of anywhere further than their Community, and they only have to focus on the future, and what lies ahead, which is already chosen out for them. But most of all, they do not know true pain, hunger or loneliness. It is all controlled, and the citizens don’t even know it. “Once he had yearned for choice. Then, when he had a choice, he made the wrong one.” (p.216)
In The Giver, everyone is assigned to a dwelling, a spouse, and children. They must apply for a house once they have found a spouse, and the Committee must approve of your application. This proves the statement of protecting people from making the wrong choices, because they want everyone to have the right spouse that suits them, considering factors like intelligence, level of energy and interests, which must all correspond perfectly. But "When adults of the community became older...They were no longer needed to create family units." (p.132) They have a time limit for having a family, and a limit for how many children they can apply for. "Two children - one male, one female - to each family unit. It was written very clearly in the rules." (p.20) Though this minimalizes over population, it confines the citizens to a certain number. But this doesn’t matter to the community because they don’t have love or affection for their family, just a genuine liking that isn’t even real. They couldn’t care less about how many children they have as long as they fit in with the Community and follow the rules. The children aren’t even related to the parents so they lack the bond or special connection that defines what family really is all about. “He was in a room filled with people, and it was warm…There were cries of delight. They hugged one another.” (p.157) Imagine not being able to share that atmosphere with the ones you care for, because it’s against the rules. The Elders think taking away raw emotions will make the Community a better place, but raw emotions are what makes us human. And the Community aren’t even aware of it.
Careers are what makes up our everyday lives. They are the reason we attend school and strive to do well and learn new skills that can apply to what we will do in the future. We spend the first chapter of our lives studying until everything leads up to what we’re going to do when we “grow up.” But in The Giver, the children have hardly reached puberty when they are each assigned a job that they must do for the rest of their lives until they are Elders. Their Assignments are “scrupulously thought through by the Committee of Elders.” (p.69) Although this takes away the pressure of finding a job and maintaining it in order to make a living, there is still the empty space of choice that they don’t have.  “What's important is the preparation for adult life, and the training you'll receive in your Assignment.”(p.17) There is always the possibility that they may not like the job that has been assigned to them, but they must do it, without complaining. And since they don’t earn any wages or money from it, there is no motivation that drives them to work harder; it’s just day after day of reward-less work. But if they don’t have the stress of financial management, they don’t have poverty, so maybe it is worth working every day if everything is given to you free of charge. You would think life would be much easier, but it isn’t all about the simplicity; it’s about what you’d prefer, and since the citizens of the community don’t even get a choice in what they will do for the rest of their lives, it isn’t the most perfect way to live either.
These days our education is based on a wide variety of subjects, to teach us everything we need to know, but for the Community, what they are taught is very limited, because of their limited knowledge of the past, and the rest of the world. The decision the Committee of Elders made to deprive everyone from carrying memories of the past was made to protect them from pain and suffering. But before that there was a time when “‘memories once existed before Receivers were created...’” (p.135) Memories make up who we are, what we’ve achieved and experienced. It makes life more interesting if we all had different memories to share; it brings up feelings of nostalgia, tears, laughter and gathers people together as a conversation starter. Sometimes memories can be traumatizing or depressing, so we push them away to the corners of our mind, trying to forget the terrible past and move on with the future; a fresh start from a dark beginning. This is what the Committee are protecting the community from by creating just one person to hold the dark painful past and leave everyone else without a heavy weight on their shoulders to live their lives peacefully. “The worst part of holding the memories is not the pain. It’s the loneliness of it. Memories need to be shared.” (p.33) Ignorance is bliss when you are oblivious to the problems of the world. But it hardly seems fair that one person has to be burdened and pained; “‘it would seem a little easier if the memories were shared…’ ‘But then everyone would be burdened and pained.’” (p.46-47) Not only would everyone be burdened with memories, but if the citizens of the Community knew about “all that goes beyond – all that is Elsewhere – and all that goes back” (p.56) they would leave the Community and live differently. And because the Community don’t have the knowledge they need to make their own choices, nothing changes and they stay in the same mindless routine, not knowing any better than they’ve grown accustomed to since birth. On the other hand, memories of the past help determine the future, and without wisdom people would make the same mistakes over and over. And that is why “memories would not be lost with you. Memories are forever.”(p.144) because they teach the future generations the consequences of each action, and the cause and effect, but “They wouldn’t know how to deal with it all.”(p.182)
In conclusion, citizens of the Community are basically instructed through their lives to do this, or do that, and they never learn anything by doing it themselves. “‘We gained control of many things. But we had to let go of others.’” (p.124).They managed to control poverty and homelessness, in exchange for the absence of choice, love and memories. They live a “life where nothing was ever unexpected. Or inconvenient. Or unusual. The life without colour, pain or past.” (p.207). There is a great balance of good things in exchange for the bad; however, that depends on what perspective you look at it. It depends on what life you’re used to, what you’ve been taught to believe, and most importantly, on your own personal opinion; something the citizens of the Community don’t even get to have. They may be protected from making the wrong choices, but without choice, there is nothing. Without choice, they are lost in life, waiting for other people to point them in the right direction. But you can’t always rely on someone else to choose what’s best for you, sometimes you just have to take the risk of being wrong and work it out yourself. Otherwise, how will you ever learn?

Friday, 12 September 2014

All Quiet On The Western Front Quotes

Quotations for my English Essay:


  • "The war wouldn't be nearly as bad if we could only get more sleep." (p.2)
  • “Young men? That was a long time ago. We are old now.” (p.13)
  • “Our lives didn’t go much further than that as yet. And now 
  • nothing is left of it all.” (p.14)
  • “We have lost all our ability to se things in other ways, because they are artificial. For us, it is only the facts that count.” (p.15)
  • “The less they had to say for themselves in Civvy Street, the more it goes to their heads now.” (p.31)
  • “Some old goat was so moved that he referred to us as ‘young heroes’.” (p.35)
  • “We have turned into human animals.” (p.39)
  • “The war has ruined us for everything…we’re no longer young men. We’ve lost any desire to conquer the world…We are fleeing from ourselves…We believe in the war.” (p.54)
  • “I think that we are lost.” (p.85)
  • “We are dead men with no feelings.” (p.80)
  • “You can get used to anything, even being in the trenches.” (p.96)
  • “An order has turned these silent figures into our enemies; an order could turn them into friends again.” (p.133)
  • “I am young…but I know nothing of life except despair, death, fear and…suffering…Our knowledge of life is limited to death.” (p.180)
  • “No man’s land is outside us and inside us too.” (p.185)
  • “Let the months come, and the year, they’ll take nothing more from me, they can take nothing more from me. I am so alone and devoid of any hope that I can confront them without fear.” (p.200)


Wednesday, 10 September 2014

Acid Princess - NEW ALBUM COMING SOON!!!!!!

I am working on a new Acid Album titled: ACID PRINCESS

Because I am an Acid Princess exploring the universe of music
The beats and basses calling to me in the breeze
The sound fairies showering me with swift notes
To inspire my creativity and tempt out my inner DJ

I am uploading my tunes to Soundcloud and Youtube so check out the links to have a sample of sweet music!

Bubble

Bubble

In a soapy cocoon

I float

Carried by the wind

I gloat

For I am kissed by the sun

Embraced by the clouds

Colours swirling like a 

kaleidoscope
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Sunday, 7 September 2014

Would You Rather?

15 Most Difficult Would You Rather Questions ANSWERED BY ME!

Jazzy P, you're next!
It's time for a game of...

1. Would you rather...

a. Live one 1,000 year life
b. Or live ten 100 year lives?

The reason I choose B. is because I have more variety and from the first life I will learn valuable lessons to help me in the next lives. Plus, I don't want to see all my friends and family DIE.

2. Would you rather...

a. Have hiccups for the rest of your life?
b. Or feel like you need to sneeze or not be able to for the rest of your life?

I would hate to have hiccups all the time because imagine making an important presentation while going 

HIC - HIC - HIC!

3. Would you rather...

a. Have the ability to read minds but be illiterate

b. Or have just the ability to read?

4. Would you rather...

a. Watch your parents have sex every day for a year?
b. Join in once to make it stop
EWWWWW! WTF?! No just NO! Next Question!

5.  Would you rather...

a. Eat chocolate flavoured poop
b. Or poop flavoured chocolate?

6. You're on a desert island with a beautiful man. Would you rather...

a. They are top half fish?
b. Or they are bottom half fish?
My own hunky Merman!

7. Would you rather...

a. Fart popcorn?
b. Or have your past and future web browsing history available to everyone?
Farting popcorn sounds incredibly painful...

8. Would you rather...

a. Go to Hogwarts as a Muggle
b. Or live in a world of Pokemon, but only be able to catch Magikarps

9. Would you rather...

a. Have a vagina on your forehead?
b. Or have a row of penises down your back like a stegosauraus? 
At least I could cover it up, right? Doesn't mean I wanna be a slut and have tensomes!

10. Would you rather...

a. Have a bell go off every time you're aroused?
b. Feel a sharp pain in your side every time someone says your name?
The bell won't go off very often, though

11. Would you rather...

a. Have accordions for legs
b. Or have a HUGE belly button 10 inches long that swayed to the beat of popular music
Just imagine how much belly button lint you would have... EURGH!

12. Would you rather...

a. Have sex with a goat, but no one knows that you did?

b. Or NOT have sex with a goat, but everything THINKS you did it?

I can keep a secret...

13. Would you rather...

a. Live in a world where huge friendly gummy bears walk around
b. Or live in a world where hoverboards never exist?
They'd be my best friends! And, I really need a hover board. Make my life so much easier!

14. Would you rather...

a. Live the rest of your life with Cheetos dust on your fingers
b. Or have taste buds in your butt?

15. And now, the hardest question: Would you rather...

a. Have a side soup
b. Have a side salad!!!!!!!!!

Can't live without my salad





Monday, 1 September 2014

Fearless | New Story

Fearless

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Check out my new story on Quotev.com

It can also be found @ Wattpad

Plot: Ingrid Derwent lives in a dystopian world where the government controls everyone's thought, emotions and dreams.But after taking the Purple Pill on her 18th birthday, Ingrid discovers that there is more to the illusion that they live in.And with the help from a criminal with clear eyes and her long lost father, Ingrid unravels the truth for everyone to see...